Okay, not me, precisely. I'm fighting a rather nasty dose of the flu.
No, no. I mean my work, well one of my stories.
This time, it's my uncompleted-first-draft of a WiP. Yes, I'm talking about Dark One's Mistress
Dianne K. Salerni and Marcy are giving their first impression of the first page (which has since had the Road and citadel on the second page).
As if that wasn't enough, Marcy is also critiquing DOM's whole first chapter over at Unicorn Bell.
Already, I've been tweeking and rewriting to clarify some spots. So if you reach the end and want to read more, flick me an email (tandora(at)farmside.co.nz) and we'll talk about swapping chapters. ^_^
Okay, I'm out. Hopefully, I feel better by the time the Buccaneer Blogfest starts.